Here first is Judith Wright’s poem “Water” from her 1966 book The Other Half (page 240 of Collected Poems, page 223 of the Second Edition of CP)
Water
Water in braids and tumbles, shells of spray,
heaves of clear glass and solemn greeneyed pools,
eel-coils and quick meanders, goes its way
fretting this savage basalt with its tools,
where from the hot rock-edge I drop my hands
and see their bones spread out like tugging weed,
each finger double-winged with ampersands
that stand above the current’s talking-speed.
Such sentences, such cadences of speech
the tonguing water stutters in its race
as may have set us talking each to each
before our language found its proper pace;
since we are channelled by its running stream.
A skin of water glitters on your eye,
and round your skull a halo of faint steam
breathes up to join the spindrift in the sky.
NOTE: Ampersand = &; spindrift = spray blown along the surface of the sea
HERE NOW IS STEPHEN MASON’S RESPONSE:
Rainforest
Epigraph from Judith Wright’s “Water”
“… Such sentences such cadences of speech
the tongueing water stutters in its race
as may have set us talking each to each…”
I walk with Gabriele a Quaker Elder
friend of mine who chats with me about
the silent light of prayer we know
the unseen light
the silent voice we’ve come to see
and hear the spirit that turns the stars
and spins the earth and fires the sun
and lights imaginging we make with voice
and vision in our minds we talk about and walk
around our histories of faith we share
with Geroge Fox and Richard Rohr
while tracking by the streams that flow
through Mt Tambourine
we talk about he way we think of things
while waliking through the forest by the sea
we cannot see the forest for the trees
for thoughts are streaming waterfalls
from rivers underground before
our words are thinking water flows
and we are dinking liquid
conversation through the leaves…
and we are climbing rocky steps of books
we’ve read descending lush ravines
of talks we’ve heard through all the singing
birds spilling urgent songs and lizards
turning running off like our talk goes on and on
into our tasty picnic feast overlooking forest
stretching out toward the sea we enter silent
meditation on reflections in the the light
flowing out of rivers underground through the trees
beside the streams of Mt. Tambourine
Stephen Mason Nov 2023 at “Called to be…”

This is a wonderful response to Judith Wright’s amazing poem water, in which she sees the profound links between the human presence and the ageless movement of water, linking these to the flow of conversation. And Steve’s poem, amazingly picks up on some of Judith’s language imagery and transforms a walk into the forest into a spiritual engagement with the energies of the natural world. Thank you!