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Early Morning to Work- Crossing the Iron-Cove Bridge by Train 6am

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Dawnlight freshens the world anew
Cool, orange glow over Olympic Park
The river glows
Early morning skiffs
Oars suspended over the glaze
Rest
Taking in the morning’s
Halo of blessings.

  14 comments for “Early Morning to Work- Crossing the Iron-Cove Bridge by Train 6am”

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    karliefarlie
    June 1, 2005 at 4:05 am

    I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There’s just something about the morning that I just can’t put my finger on… it’s so peaceful! I think “halo of blessings” describes it very well though.

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      michaelgriffith1
      June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

      Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
      Cheers
      MG

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        migriffith
        June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

        Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
        Cheers
        MG

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    karliefarlie
    June 1, 2005 at 4:05 am

    I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There’s just something about the morning that I just can’t put my finger on… it’s so peaceful! I think “halo of blessings” describes it very well though.

    Reply
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      michaelgriffith1
      June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

      Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
      Cheers
      MG

      Reply
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    karliefarlie
    June 1, 2005 at 4:05 am

    I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There’s just something about the morning that I just can’t put my finger on… it’s so peaceful! I think “halo of blessings” describes it very well though.

    Reply
    • Unknown's avatar
      michaelgriffith1
      June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

      Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
      Cheers
      MG

      Reply
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    karliefarlie
    June 1, 2005 at 4:05 am

    I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There’s just something about the morning that I just can’t put my finger on… it’s so peaceful! I think “halo of blessings” describes it very well though.

    Reply
    • Unknown's avatar
      michaelgriffith1
      June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

      Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
      Cheers
      MG

      Reply
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    karliefarlie
    June 1, 2005 at 4:05 am

    I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There’s just something about the morning that I just can’t put my finger on… it’s so peaceful! I think “halo of blessings” describes it very well though.

    Reply
  6. Unknown's avatar
    karliefarlie
    June 1, 2005 at 4:05 am

    I really like the last 2 lines of your poem! There’s just something about the morning that I just can’t put my finger on… it’s so peaceful! I think “halo of blessings” describes it very well though.

    Reply
    • Unknown's avatar
      michaelgriffith1
      June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

      Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
      Cheers
      MG

      Reply
  7. Unknown's avatar
    michaelgriffith1
    June 1, 2005 at 12:33 pm

    Thanks Karlie- writing these few lines just helped me to deepen my appreciation of what was happening around me… I think that is what poetry is for…
    Cheers
    MG

    Reply

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